4.24
the little golf cart takes us
through the construction
zone to the clinic.
the clinic stairs take us up
to the deconstruction zone
for what’s ailing.
between the two the ride
back out is much more
satisfying.
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4.24
the little golf cart takes us
through the construction
zone to the clinic.
the clinic stairs take us up
to the deconstruction zone
for what’s ailing.
between the two the ride
back out is much more
satisfying.
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This poem resonates with me. The concision does good work reflecting the speaker’s preference not to dwell on the matters of the body. I also love the ending; I see a double meaning that focuses on the wonder of life, not just the relief of a check-up.